Common App Personal Statement · 648 words · · Admitted
Personal growthCreative / artisticOvercoming a setbackPersonal challenge
An exceptional pain struck my right shoulder just hours after routine track practice. I reported the symptoms to my father who promptly administered Tylenol. While adjusting myself restlessly on our living room sofa, the sharp sensation rapidly spread across my body. For a fleeting moment, all my muscles tightened and trapped me in utter agony. Then, ninety seconds passed and a release overwhelmed me. I was completely paralyzed. At twelve, I suffered a rare spinal cord stroke, which left me entirely immobile and feeling yet still cognitively intact. While lying in the coffin-like chamber of a…
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