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Common App Personal Statement · 249 words · · Admitted
Personal growthLeadershipCommunity impactSports
“Orange throw!” As I extended my arm to signal properly, the smallest girl on the orange team picked up the ball to throw it back into play. In AYSO, U10 players often lift their back foot when throwing the ball, so I focused my attention there. Don’t lift it. Keep it down. It shot straight up. My instincts blew the whistle to stop the game. The rulebook is simple: the rule was broken, give it to the other team. But the way she tried, eager to play, eager to learn and try again— I couldn’t punish that. So I made my way over to the sideline to try it myself. “When we’re throwing it in, we…
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