University of Pennsylvania, Columbia University, Brown University
Common App Personal Statement · 619 words · · Admitted
Personal growthLeadershipCreative / artistic
I simply couldn’t hold back the deluge of tears that flooded like water through a leaky dyke. Our new music teacher, Ms. L., hadn't shown up for the orchestra rehearsal, and we had been plagued with problematic microphones and harassed by security guards who insisted on closing up early. Accustomed to how our old teacher had helped us prepare, we had focused on perfecting the pieces, paying little heed to tedious administrative issues. Consequently, we were facing a grim and disordered reality as the big night of our annual concert. When I vented to a close friend, he told me my frustrations…
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